Tuesday, July 16, 2013

How To Get Ahead in Writing (I Think)


Despite the fact that there are probably more reasons for writing a work of fiction as there are actual works of fiction it seems to be the case that there is one thing they all must possess to be successful in any meaningful sense: an audience. This isn't to say that fiction becomes better or somehow more fictional as more people read it, rather it's simply to state the commonplace that a writer is always writing in the belief that someone else will be reading what he's written. Even in cases where the writer aims to create the most obscure work imaginable he or she is still conscious of the fact that they are responsible for what someone else will encounter on the page or screen. This is as true of Ulysees as it is of The Twits.

How then are writers of “literary” fiction to balance this obligation to make some kind of sense (or non-sense) to their audience against the imperative to preserve their artistic integrity? Having recently read Kevin Barry's There are Little Kingdoms and Paul Murray's Skippy Dies (and knowing that both have amassed relatively large audiences for their work) I thought it might be interesting to compare the two in terms of their likely appeal to their respective audiences.

The first thing that strikes you is that both writers are preoccupied by youth. In comparison with works by the likes of Sebastian Barry or Colm Tobin you'll not find any elderly women here. The closest you'll get to old age is one cruelly vital old priest and drunken Freddie Bliss, fondly recalling better days while his daughter tears apart his home. After that the oldest people we encounter are middle aged types refusing to recognise that they're rapidly approaching the point when youth culture will be completely alien to them. Youth, in all its conceited self obsession, reigns supreme and this illuminates part of the appeal of Barry and Murray: readers of “literary” fiction tend to be slightly more sceptical of youth culture than other consumers.

Another point of kinship between the two is their tentative embrace of post modernism. One never gets the sense that the narrative is unreliable beyond there being a strong sense that most of the characters (especially in Barry's work, a short story collection) are only interested in perpetuating some kind of self-deluding fantasy. This is most obvious in Barry's short story To The Hills, a tale of three single fortysomethings on a hiking trip:

Teresa decided that she was having a terrific time. This intimacy, she felt, was powerful stuff. Yes, she was greatly enjoying the whole experience but she would enjoy it al the more when she was at home on her couch, alone except for the cat, with the lights dimmed and a glass full to the brim and the late programme on Lyric playing low on the radio. Then she would savour it all truly.

Indeed, this fate of being dominated by the useless tendency to self-mythologise has already marked the cool-as-fuck Galwegian students in Party at Helen's, the doomed teenage hero of the “breeze-block” arcade in Atlantic City, and the randy farmer unable to help himself in Animal Needs. In recounting it all Barry adopts the tone of a sardonic pulp fiction narrator, despairing over the stupidity of his fictional charges but never doubting the ultimate worth of the story being told. Indeed, one of Barry's major assets as a storyteller is to ensure that the coolness of his stories is never in doubt; we're confident we can sneer smugly at his characters because they wouldn't understand the interest of their predicament if they encountered somebody else enduring it.

If it can be fairly said that Barry's aversion to post modernism arises from his contempt for his characters Murray's reticence concerning the unreliable narrator trope seems to come from a desire to be sincere. Like There Are Little Kingdoms, Skippy Dies features a doomed teenager (named Skippy, unsurprisingly). Unlike Kingdoms however, Murray's work explores in detail (it is not a concise work) the reasons for this death. In doing so, Skippy Dies makes clear what Kingdoms only implies: that meaningful communication between generations is impossible when youthfulness becomes a sovereign ideal. Murray explores this theme fully and the effect is that the teenagers resemble the kids in South Park: they're the only vaguely reasonable characters on display. Thus, we have the Howard “the coward” Fallon, a teacher working at his old secondary school who effectively endures a never ending adolescence because of a grisly teenage accident, the childishly ambitious school principal nicknamed “The Automator”, and Coach Roche, a former captain of the school rugby trading on his aura of faded glory. While not actively conniving in the propagation of teenage misery, the other adult characters seem completely ignorant of the mental and material well-being of their charges.

It's in this void of mutual comprehension where Murray differs most strongly from Barry: he seems to have a faint hope that literature might have some relevant role in the lives of these characters. And so Fallon goes on a voyage of discovery concerning the lives and works of Robert Graves and Rudyard Kipling, a journey which concludes with him echoing Alyosha Karamazov in trying to explain to his pupils why people suffer. This is probably the loveliest section of the whole book and shows that at least some of Barry's characters are trying to understand their predicament. Alas though, the hope that literature mattes was faint indeed and Murray ultimately achieves the rare distinction of being bleaker than Dostoevsky by implicating Fallon in the grotesque cover up surrounding poor Skippy's death. Despite the abundance of teenage humour in Skippy Dies it's really about as grim a read as you would expect from a book dealing with teenage suicide.

It's not hard to understand the appeal of Barry and Murray for their audiences: both deal with a theme that is a natural fit for literary fiction, namely the unhealthy and unhelpful appeal of youth culture. By their lights it purveys, at best, self-deluding fantasies while at worst it can bring about a lethal sense of alienation in those who place too much faith in its promises and suggestions. In assuming fairly conventional narrative voices they manage to tell new stories through old forms, and broaden their appeal even further
















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