Showing posts with label failure. Show all posts
Showing posts with label failure. Show all posts

Tuesday, July 16, 2013

How To Get Ahead in Writing (I Think)


Despite the fact that there are probably more reasons for writing a work of fiction as there are actual works of fiction it seems to be the case that there is one thing they all must possess to be successful in any meaningful sense: an audience. This isn't to say that fiction becomes better or somehow more fictional as more people read it, rather it's simply to state the commonplace that a writer is always writing in the belief that someone else will be reading what he's written. Even in cases where the writer aims to create the most obscure work imaginable he or she is still conscious of the fact that they are responsible for what someone else will encounter on the page or screen. This is as true of Ulysees as it is of The Twits.

How then are writers of “literary” fiction to balance this obligation to make some kind of sense (or non-sense) to their audience against the imperative to preserve their artistic integrity? Having recently read Kevin Barry's There are Little Kingdoms and Paul Murray's Skippy Dies (and knowing that both have amassed relatively large audiences for their work) I thought it might be interesting to compare the two in terms of their likely appeal to their respective audiences.

The first thing that strikes you is that both writers are preoccupied by youth. In comparison with works by the likes of Sebastian Barry or Colm Tobin you'll not find any elderly women here. The closest you'll get to old age is one cruelly vital old priest and drunken Freddie Bliss, fondly recalling better days while his daughter tears apart his home. After that the oldest people we encounter are middle aged types refusing to recognise that they're rapidly approaching the point when youth culture will be completely alien to them. Youth, in all its conceited self obsession, reigns supreme and this illuminates part of the appeal of Barry and Murray: readers of “literary” fiction tend to be slightly more sceptical of youth culture than other consumers.

Another point of kinship between the two is their tentative embrace of post modernism. One never gets the sense that the narrative is unreliable beyond there being a strong sense that most of the characters (especially in Barry's work, a short story collection) are only interested in perpetuating some kind of self-deluding fantasy. This is most obvious in Barry's short story To The Hills, a tale of three single fortysomethings on a hiking trip:

Teresa decided that she was having a terrific time. This intimacy, she felt, was powerful stuff. Yes, she was greatly enjoying the whole experience but she would enjoy it al the more when she was at home on her couch, alone except for the cat, with the lights dimmed and a glass full to the brim and the late programme on Lyric playing low on the radio. Then she would savour it all truly.

Indeed, this fate of being dominated by the useless tendency to self-mythologise has already marked the cool-as-fuck Galwegian students in Party at Helen's, the doomed teenage hero of the “breeze-block” arcade in Atlantic City, and the randy farmer unable to help himself in Animal Needs. In recounting it all Barry adopts the tone of a sardonic pulp fiction narrator, despairing over the stupidity of his fictional charges but never doubting the ultimate worth of the story being told. Indeed, one of Barry's major assets as a storyteller is to ensure that the coolness of his stories is never in doubt; we're confident we can sneer smugly at his characters because they wouldn't understand the interest of their predicament if they encountered somebody else enduring it.

If it can be fairly said that Barry's aversion to post modernism arises from his contempt for his characters Murray's reticence concerning the unreliable narrator trope seems to come from a desire to be sincere. Like There Are Little Kingdoms, Skippy Dies features a doomed teenager (named Skippy, unsurprisingly). Unlike Kingdoms however, Murray's work explores in detail (it is not a concise work) the reasons for this death. In doing so, Skippy Dies makes clear what Kingdoms only implies: that meaningful communication between generations is impossible when youthfulness becomes a sovereign ideal. Murray explores this theme fully and the effect is that the teenagers resemble the kids in South Park: they're the only vaguely reasonable characters on display. Thus, we have the Howard “the coward” Fallon, a teacher working at his old secondary school who effectively endures a never ending adolescence because of a grisly teenage accident, the childishly ambitious school principal nicknamed “The Automator”, and Coach Roche, a former captain of the school rugby trading on his aura of faded glory. While not actively conniving in the propagation of teenage misery, the other adult characters seem completely ignorant of the mental and material well-being of their charges.

It's in this void of mutual comprehension where Murray differs most strongly from Barry: he seems to have a faint hope that literature might have some relevant role in the lives of these characters. And so Fallon goes on a voyage of discovery concerning the lives and works of Robert Graves and Rudyard Kipling, a journey which concludes with him echoing Alyosha Karamazov in trying to explain to his pupils why people suffer. This is probably the loveliest section of the whole book and shows that at least some of Barry's characters are trying to understand their predicament. Alas though, the hope that literature mattes was faint indeed and Murray ultimately achieves the rare distinction of being bleaker than Dostoevsky by implicating Fallon in the grotesque cover up surrounding poor Skippy's death. Despite the abundance of teenage humour in Skippy Dies it's really about as grim a read as you would expect from a book dealing with teenage suicide.

It's not hard to understand the appeal of Barry and Murray for their audiences: both deal with a theme that is a natural fit for literary fiction, namely the unhealthy and unhelpful appeal of youth culture. By their lights it purveys, at best, self-deluding fantasies while at worst it can bring about a lethal sense of alienation in those who place too much faith in its promises and suggestions. In assuming fairly conventional narrative voices they manage to tell new stories through old forms, and broaden their appeal even further
















Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Alone Again (Technologically)

Although it may be about as insightful as Homer Simpson's surprised remark that “they have the internet on computers now”, I still feel that it's sometimes worth pointing out that the world has become a bewilderingly abstract place. A moment's reflection on the significance of your mobile phone should suffice to illustrate the truth of this: in many regards it's a more effective representation of you than your own body is.

Hearteningly however (or traumatically, depending on your perspective), those instances where it's been unable to completely replace your flesh and bone you do still seem to be the most important: that varied grouping of experiences euphemistically referred to as intimacy. Despite the best efforts of robotics engineers, computer programmers and pornographers alike attempts at producing a computerised boy-, girl- or non-gender alignedfriend don't seem to have gained traction with the general public, yet.

On the other hand though, the algorithm producing sectors have seemingly enjoyed great success with the next best thing to intimacy: the practice formerly known as courtship. Indeed, it may simply be another sign of my advancing years but from discussions with friends and through the media in general it does seem as if internet dating is now a stronger presence in people's lives than it has ever been in the past. Certainly, dating or matchmaking services as institutions have a long history behind them but they've never before been advertised as heavily as they are now, which is just another way of saying that it's undoubtedly big business these days.

Having been single for a while some of the ad campaigns and my discussions with friends impressed me. I wondered if maybe Janis Iain was wrong and love wasn't just meant for beauty queens and high school girls with clear skin smiles.

Reader, I set up a profile. For one as verbose as I am I found this part oddly challenging. Unlike in person, you're obviously never quite sure just who you're addressing on the internet: a miserable situation (and the basic condition of all mass participation online) only made worse by the sense of vulnerability most people inevitably feel when hoping for intimacy. I must have been more lonely that I initially thought though as I persevered, eventually settling on a nice line in ironically self-aware nerdiness to describe myself. Let the truth set you free!

I waited for a while, unsure of the etiquette, before plunging in. Having overcome the trauma of making my own profile and trying to second guess my unknown, prospective companion this part was only slightly less strange. I filtered through the female profiles, aware of the fact that these avatars may have been only tangenitally related to the truth and that women viewing my own profile must have felt something similar. It's a weird and giddy feeling, knowing that people may fully doubt the truth of your existence when you're being sincere.

Banishing this feeling, I ploughed ahead. One girl, about whom I'd had a pretty good feeling based on our complimentary music tastes, replied showing some interest in meeting up. After some mildly flirtatious e-mail exchanges we agreed on a date. My fear that this might all have been some elaborate set up and that the ghost of Jeremy Beadle might appear as one of my dates had calmed during the e-mail exchanges but came back strongly in the days and hours before our agreed meet up in a city centre bar one evening.

She showed up.

I relaxed, seeing that she was as described, and I expect she felt the same. Aside from a brief awkward moment at the start when I dithered over whether to offer to get her a drink and a few brief lulls in the conversation I enjoyed the evening. Truth be told, I would have liked to have seen her again but it never happened: my hopes of a second meeting died in a flurry of apologetic text messages.

For a while afterwards I once again found myself feeling confused. Mulling over my sorry predicament I wondered if I was upset with the girl for not being interested or with myself for bothering with the enterprise in the first place. Or, indeed, was I annoyed at the dating service itself? Something about the notion of meeting someone and finding them to be “as described” rankled with me, as if we were both some kind of commodity with the potential to provide spiritual fulfilment. The fact that our introduction was mediated through a numerical code rather than a human (as an old dating service would have worked) also irritated me.Surely, it would make just as much sense to go to a nightclub and flip a coin and allow that to decide whether or not I approached a seemingly unattached girl?

Such frustrated musings borne of confusion are undignified (as well as being unappealing to prospective partners. Ladies, I am still single you know) though so I'll leave it there.

The world is indeed a bewilderingly abstract place.